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Soul Surfing

and tossed
dazed, confused
tired of tears
and being abused
I am trying to grow
and find a much better way
I have two choices...leave or stay
loved with such anger tears me in two
trying to figure out what I should do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 2/26/2017 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. This is a very emotive piece, so thanks for sharing with us. I hope things have improved nearly a decade on!
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Date: 2/26/2017 2:58:00 AM
Fabulous emotive write, hope it is fictional though. Love should be adoration not abuse. A definite 7 and going in my favourites as I know someone who needs to read this.
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Date: 12/27/2008 2:37:00 PM
Such heartfelt thoughts captured well in this challenging form. Love the title. The emotion comes throught your words. Well done! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 12/18/2008 2:57:00 AM
Perfect poetry, Robin. Loved this. You write great Etherees. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/18/2008 12:00:00 AM
That in between place.Not one to cwell in.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Robin.
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Date: 12/17/2008 3:46:00 PM
heartfelt and well done, you're really good at writing an Etheree....Maryam
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Date: 12/17/2008 3:07:00 PM
Your next to last line - you should not be loved with anger. Emotional write in great form. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/17/2008 2:16:00 PM
"Hello Precious Robin!"~Just Be You Dear!~Stay near to "The Light" that you know, and just be "You!"~You can never go wrong, when your soul speaks your words! Smile~But, if I could, I would hand you happiness within a glass, sparkling and bright! Let me read your other write dear lady, "Love Always, John!"
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Date: 12/17/2008 9:16:00 AM
Excellent title! So well rhymed and expressed... a dilemma that affects us all, at one time or another... Well done Robin! Love, Keith
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