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Soul Surfing

Lost
and tossed
dazed, confused
tired of tears
and being abused
I am trying to grow
and find a much better way
I have two choices...leave or stay
loved with such anger tears me in two
trying to figure out what I should do.

confusionintrospectionloveetheree

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John Michaels

February 26, 2017 at 6:18 AM

Congratulations on being featured. This is a very emotive piece, so thanks for sharing with us. I hope things have improved nearly a decade on!

Elizabeth Kinch

February 26, 2017 at 2:58 AM

Fabulous emotive write, hope it is fictional though. Love should be adoration not abuse. A definite 7 and going in my favourites as I know someone who needs to read this.

December 27, 2008 at 2:37 PM

Such heartfelt thoughts captured well in this challenging form. Love the title. The emotion comes throught your words. Well done! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing!! Karen

Nigel Fawcett

December 18, 2008 at 2:57 AM

Perfect poetry, Robin. Loved this. You write great Etherees. Love, Nigel

Brian Strand

December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM

That in between place.Not one to cwell in.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Robin.

Maryam Jameela Haniff

December 17, 2008 at 3:46 PM

heartfelt and well done, you're really good at writing an Etheree....Maryam

Sharon Winter

December 17, 2008 at 3:07 PM

Your next to last line - you should not be loved with anger. Emotional write in great form. Love, Shar

John Rhinem

December 17, 2008 at 2:16 PM

"Hello Precious Robin!"~Just Be You Dear!~Stay near to "The Light" that you know, and just be "You!"~You can never go wrong, when your soul speaks your words! Smile~But, if I could, I would hand you happiness within a glass, sparkling and bright! Let me read your other write dear lady, "Love Always, John!"