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Soul Surfers At Sunset-Cac

Soul Surfers at Sunset


Majestically,simply you and I.

Waist deep, the silent sea,which sways us  
in sensuous embrace.

Only our footprints on the shore remain.

My melting mind mesmerized by loves mermaid 
refrain.

In my ear, like no other, murmuring words I 
simply cannot to another human utter.

So deliciously lost there in the salty sea, my
soul swiftly swims to the sunset.

Held so tenderly, by my forever, most beloved,
Mount Olympian God, thee!


Entered in Chantelle Anne Cooke's Contest:
                   UPDATE
~Placed as one of the first place winners~
     'Slipping Soul Sets into Sea'
       
              
             April 25, 2020
                5pm PST

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Tom Cunningham Date: 4/29/2020 7:48:00 AM Top spot no less, congratulations Panagiota. Tom Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 4/29/2020 11:42:00 AM Thank you Tom...that shocked me! Panagiota xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/26/2020 4:10:00 PM this is a fantastic poem, Panagiota. I can see by Connie's comment that you placed first. I would say that you very well deserved it. Congratulations. Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 4/26/2020 8:52:00 PM Howdy Andrea! I trust all is well with you. Placing first was a shock. I am highly critical of my own poetry. Thank you for taking the time to Congratulate me. Best to you~ Panagiota xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/26/2020 4:05:00 PM What an amazing picturesque creation Panagiota! I love your entry. Congratulations on your First Placement in the contest! xxoo Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 4/26/2020 8:49:00 PM Golly, Connie! What a treat to get your comments always! You give so much. You are one of the best and most creative poets here. I was shocked at my placement but nonetheless, quite pleased. Peace, Panagiota xx

Quoth Theraven Date: 4/26/2020 10:40:00 AM Happy Sunday Panagiota, I can tell that you appreciate the unending search for self in this poem. What it means to be. I wish you well in the contest, even more in the search. -Richard Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 4/26/2020 8:44:00 PM Greetings Richard, it is Sunday and the sun swill set soon. You are right on with your evaluation of me. I am always searching for ways to expand who I am. Not as frantically as I was when younger! I have a sense of self that has been nurtured by the best for decades. Always seeking out creative venues. Always encouraging others and joyful when they discover new vistas! Gratefully, Panagiota xx

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/26/2020 9:32:00 AM I think you after such a lovely poem you will be invited to a banquet by the Olympians on mount Olympus dearest, Panagiota! Good luck my friend! Take care! Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 4/26/2020 8:36:00 PM Demetrios~ what an utterly charming comment! I am trusting you to that banquet on Mount Olympus! Be very blessed! Panagiota xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/26/2020 1:49:00 AM Love the imagery Panagiota, there is no better place to be. Tom Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 4/26/2020 8:32:00 PM Dear Tom, you got the picture so clearly! Appreciate your response, encouragement and support. Panagiota