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Soul Storm

The sky is gloomy The sun doesn’t shine My heart feels moody And not so fine Why does it not pour Like tears that fall? Why does it not roar With thunder’s call? Anger simmers ‘neath The darkened clouds Salt drops form a wreath As black mood shrouds A storm is brewing Within my soul And I’m left stewing In dungeon hole 06.16.2021

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David Scott

Date: 6/17/2021 3:39:00 AM

Simler to my poems shadow of doubt triubled soul and tomoro you too express a sense of being traped like docter jackle mr hide filled with rage at times lets hope tomorow is in full bloom like the lay out and change in verses the last line a storm brewing in my soul left stewing in dungeon hole epic peace ds

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/16/2021 12:05:00 PM

Hello Jo Daniel, it sounds like a battle within yourself. Enjoy your day my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/16/2021 10:31:00 AM

You write with great insight about sad emotions. Well done.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/16/2021 10:09:00 AM

Yes, feeling gloomy inside can feel like a storm brewing as you describe. Then, the sun will shine again. Well done :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/16/2021 8:50:00 AM

We encounter many storms as we go through life Jo but then calm is restored and the sun shines again. Tom

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/16/2021 8:35:00 AM

Hello Jo, Very meaningful poem felt from a flowing stormy heart. In every life a little rain must fall. -Richard

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/16/2021 7:52:00 AM

WoW! Jo, What a deep and emotional write. I have had storms in my soul on many occasions. You expressed that feeling so well; I found it to be so poetic and well written.Just like in the natural “soul,” storms will pass( Although they can take a long time). Thank God that they eventually pass. Well done. This is going straight into my favs. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2021 7:17:00 AM

Jo, beautiful writing, so emotional, I have felt just like this also many times but it is not good to let anger simmer, I find peace in the tranquility of nature but just let the anger go if you can, love _Constance