Soul Sighs

How dark, how cold, how so lonely his heart feels without tender touch by his lover, his soul, his breath; cascading tears flood his eyes, yet his soul blooms with hopes to see her.
Picture 1 Nov. 9, 2020 Double Tetractys 5 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Ranaweera  Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:00 AM
This is an excellent piece, Loving Kindness!! I feel his loneliness and suffering without a tender touch by his soul-mate. Good Luck in Eve's contest!!
Kindness Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Newton Arach, Thank you very much for commenting.
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