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Soul Of Mine

Budgie's Quote: There is a balance between the Divinity of nature, and the Divinity of spirituality. Soul of mine you have taken a shine to the beauty that resides in every tree and every lake. You have left behind the noises of this world and embraced the sound of a cooing dove, the hooting of the owl in the prime of night the blare of a cardinal by early morning dawn. Soul of mine, you have illuminated my path in life with the breath of heaven and yet you have not spoken, one single word* Soul of mine for the sake of you, I have renounced all buzzers crackles and chatters, for the love of you dear soul, I have embraced the mystical experience of just being me, and within that moment of being, I have given you me and you have given me you.

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Silent One

Date: 3/24/2024 8:26:00 AM

You wrote a wonderful poem using Budgie's quote.. I am sure he loved it..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2024 1:58:00 PM

its nice how we inspire each other each and every day here on soup, :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/23/2024 1:57:00 PM

I enjoyed the mystical that you wove into your poem. The last verse was so powerful yet calm. The last line, "I have given you me and you have given me you," was brilliant! A soulful poem and read, dearest Rose. Nicely done in your beautiful style. Have a great evening, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2024 1:59:00 PM

Precious is the soul that sees another and gratifies its journey, thank you

Ink Empress

Date: 3/23/2024 12:46:00 PM

This poem depicts the inner light within you, selfless and beautiful, and your lines flow in such a soft and seamless manner that made me feel so much reading this, i thought of so many reasons , why i have embraced the mystical experience of just being me. What a deep write dear fragrant rose, i absolutely love this! You always leave me in awe. Sending you light always

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2024 1:59:00 PM

So glad to see you and your beautiful content Ink, you always delight my days, thank you for your time and presence here :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2024 9:11:00 AM

Ahh!! Very interesting lines penned. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2024 2:00:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by Sara and your kind comment :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/23/2024 9:00:00 AM

"Soul of mine for the sake of you, I have renounced all buzzers crackles and chatters, for the love of you dear soul," Excellent, positive write. Love it! Well done. I enter the silence...not for the empty~ but the fill.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2024 2:00:00 PM

Ever so precious to read your words and smile today Thanks Joe for your time, and friendship