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Soul of Chaos

My soul is torn in two, in this tangled web of chaos, trapped in this tomb's spiders lacework in anguish and despair. Dare I run, hide in shadowed alleys? If, my soul will just assent to a haven of order? 11/18/2021 Soul Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2021 11:57:00 PM

" If, my soul will just assent to a haven of order?" This is optimistically real.

Robert James Liguori

Date: 11/21/2021 10:01:00 AM

Thank you for entering the contest. Congrats on your placement. Robert

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/21/2021 9:08:00 AM

Dear Eve, you have captured the torment of one's soul. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/21/2021 7:03:00 AM

Best wishes, Eve, Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/21/2021 5:27:00 AM

I feel the angst!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/20/2021 7:07:00 PM

The tension of the restless soul truly felt in this poem, Eve. Kudos, Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/19/2021 12:36:00 PM

Hello Eve, yes i agree with Charles Messina, this is a great book to read. Foot prints In The Sand. I have read this book. Enjoy your day my friend.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/19/2021 10:25:00 AM

"All roads lead to Rome", i.e., life, including eternal life, is cyclical, so you will arrive one way or another ....sometime . . . .

Charles Messina

Date: 11/19/2021 4:18:00 AM

Sorry, Eve. Whenever my soul is wrapped in a chaos I always resort to "Footsteps in the sand" Nice entry...best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 11/18/2021 10:46:00 PM

Lovely entry for your contest. I am in chaos too. Hugs.