Soul Mate

Soul mate You are my air, with out you I can not breathe. I am your heart, with out me you can not be. We are soul mate's from now until eternity. Love me not, love me so, love me with all your heart and soul...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Carrillo Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Very short, but very good. Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing....ucilla
Montalbo Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:50 AM
thank you very much ... Gina
Clemons Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Romantic piece, Gina. Eternity's description is deeply expressed in this great, short piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Montalbo Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thank you very much will visit soon.... Gina
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:17 PM
Sweet and enjoyable. Change breeth to breathe and it will be perfect!! :) // paul
Montalbo Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Thank you.... Paul.... Smiles
A  Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Hi Gina, this is so sweet, ~SKAT~
Montalbo Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Thank you... Skat..... Smiles
Lamoureux Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 12:29 AM
Change mow to now and it will be perfect. A sweet romantic piece.
Montalbo Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 1:29 AM
(Smile) thank you..... Gina
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