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Soul Auction

Written: October 18, 2023, For Ink Empress Dodoitsu Contest
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soul auctioned out to mirage
hostile and harmful hardship
cunning, for the devil, grins
In pursuit of fame

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Silent One Date: 10/24/2023 12:57:00 PM Great arrangement of words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/24/2023 6:07:00 AM Indeed in pursuit of fame, instead finding eternal flames! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/24/2023 3:52:00 AM Dear Sotto, this is truly a brilliant dodoitsu, it was hard placing this one, as it almost was a first place winner because of the depth of this and how i can resonate with this! I know few like this too in this world, in pursuit of fame , selling themselves to the dark and also hiding behind masks, as their soul is lost, in a mirage, cunning for the devil! Soul hitting really! I love this one! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved! Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/20/2023 8:39:00 AM Wow, this dodoitsu poem really speaks immense depth! You've conveyed some very aching and heart-wrenching emotions here, "soul auctioned to mirage" Evokes a myriad sense, where the soul is lost in the chaos.. Your wordplay is impeccable here, very intriguing as well! Brilliantly written! Best of luck for the contest... Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 10/19/2023 11:36:00 AM Excellent Dodoitsu. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2023 6:05:00 AM - Excellent done :) - You went for a deep theme, Las ... I went for humor ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/19/2023 1:38:00 AM Well constructed and deep in meaning. Blessings. Login to Reply