Soul Auction

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Written: October 18, 2023, For Ink Empress Dodoitsu Contest ________________________________ soul auctioned out to mirage hostile and harmful hardship cunning, for the devil, grins In pursuit of fame

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:57:00 PM

Great arrangement of words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 6:07:00 AM

Indeed in pursuit of fame, instead finding eternal flames! Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 3:52:00 AM

Dear Sotto, this is truly a brilliant dodoitsu, it was hard placing this one, as it almost was a first place winner because of the depth of this and how i can resonate with this! I know few like this too in this world, in pursuit of fame , selling themselves to the dark and also hiding behind masks, as their soul is lost, in a mirage, cunning for the devil! Soul hitting really! I love this one! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/20/2023 8:39:00 AM

Wow, this dodoitsu poem really speaks immense depth! You've conveyed some very aching and heart-wrenching emotions here, "soul auctioned to mirage" Evokes a myriad sense, where the soul is lost in the chaos.. Your wordplay is impeccable here, very intriguing as well! Brilliantly written! Best of luck for the contest...

Jay Narain

Date: 10/19/2023 11:36:00 AM

Excellent Dodoitsu.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2023 6:05:00 AM

- Excellent done :) - You went for a deep theme, Las ... I went for humor ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2023 1:38:00 AM

Well constructed and deep in meaning. Blessings.