Soul-Embrace Whispers

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Written: October 15, 2023 _______________________________________________ Shadows dwell in the confines of dreams. I delve into an abyss of enigmas streams. The soul is a marvel waiting to be unfolded. To be felt, embraced, and aired to the world. I slowly peel up my mask for each wary tug. Disclosing the truth lies beneath the shrug. Finishing yet another conundrum or quest. locating the vitality trapped inside the chest. Inhalations of holy trees yearn to be heard. A tune rich with wisdom, haphazardly blurred It falls down in pools of various hues of gray. Time hurdles have been destroyed in clay. Lyrics fall akin to twigs in an autumnal breeze. Build vivid notions in the mind with salient ease. Imaginary oxblood leaks from your lover's lips. Whispering whispers as the full moon dimly dips These archaic cursive instances appear in wait. I wish tears to dry before my memories slate. They linger on a blank page since it is too late. Or, mingle on a shared stage as poets relate. Before such radiance fades in the night. To waltz and wanton, yarns of moonlight Stars strike notes, nurturing a symphony. A tune that vibrates in the soul is harmony. Thus, I disclose the core of my being. As a star sways, watch its hint of foreseeing. The soft rumblings of the heart's embrace A romantic choreography, a cosmic chase But we can bear power at any given time. To fit inside and enable our souls to sublime. Whispers of soul embrace a cosmic love chase. I glance inwardly for calmness and grace.

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2023 7:03:00 AM

This is so meaningful and very powerful! A very well written poem as always, your way with rhymes and flow of such wise words truly is captivating! I love the line “ Whispering whispers as the full moon dimly dips” such moving imagery. “ Or, mingle on a shared stage as poets relate“ and the cosmic chase too so ethereal and cosmically divine poetic verses so descriptively woven! I loved reading this and the romantic choreography of so much more from within that you’ve put in words is impeccable

Valsa George

Date: 10/16/2023 12:26:00 AM

An introspection into the soul and its many dimensions.... a true surrealistic poem. Soul is indefinable, still you have made its form so tangible. "Whispers of soul embrace a cosmic love chase. I glance inwardly for calmness and grace." Yes, calmness and grace can only come from inside. This beautiful poem is thus summed up with two powerful lines- As ever, your poem flows freely in impeccable rhyme.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2023 1:48:00 PM

The soft rumblings of the heart's embrace A romantic choreography, a cosmic chase---so beautifully described my friend. Your poem echoes the voice of soul from start to finish. A FAVE for your muse that keeps painting your dreams.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2023 12:40:00 PM

Your poem is indeed A romantic choreography. So much imagery astounds the reader and keeps him alert to the emotions portrayed. Simply magnificent. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/15/2023 12:38:00 PM

an almost surrealistic poem that took me on a dream-like journey. I agree with you...the soul is a marvel waiting to be unfolded--that was a powerful line!! as was romantic choreography, a cosmic chase. In my dreams, I feel as if I 'glance inwardly for calmness and grace.' I was in awe of your imagery and rhyme scheme. Sotto, you truly are a brilliant poet with so much to offer with your insights and perceptions. I'm grateful you are here. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 9:12:00 AM

A wonderful message in our poem.. who knows our fate and what will happen or become of us and those around us.. your poem takes the reader on a journey with many different situations to consider... it flows and rhymes so well, something you do excellently...