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Within the alleyways lay death. The burdened bureaucrats on their lunch break lounge in front of an orange stand ignoring the masked face within the burnoose snaking through the stalls. Frankincense sticks and coffee beans purfume the tumultuous aisles as the figure moves the belt loop toward martyrdom. Heavenly maidens await this jihad ghost while figs and pomegranates fly through the air and televisions show bloody faces. When will it end ... this mayhem, this obscene use of beings meant to dance and sing, paint and create rather than obliterate in plastic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 6:49:00 AM
Strong words... great write... Oh, to simultaneously put down weapons and live the dream of peace... But there seem to be too many egos at stake. And we all pay in life or in kind. Keep writing, Sue. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 7/30/2009 1:43:00 PM
A great write Sue..Representing reality. =) you've got soup mail
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:04:00 PM
My dear friend I seen it all as I read it. Edge of my seat . Outstanding writing Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2009 4:41:00 PM
Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2009 3:39:00 PM
Powerful writing, Sue! I had images of the terrorist attacks running through my mind as I read this. And I, too, want to know when the mayhem will end. Brilliant poetry!! Love, Carolyn
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