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Is anyone out there? Message transmission is scrambled. I really need help right now. Ozone layer is fading, Waters are polluted, Wars are destroying cities, Religions are dividing people. When I came down here, I didn't mean to make my life complicated with rules and knowledge are encyclopedic in nature; I just wanted to change the world a bit, only to change myself to something I never wanted to be. Is anyone out there? I'm trying to interpret possible signals from your radio. A helping hand is really meaningful for me right now; take me to a world I always dream about - take me to my new home.....

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2017 1:02:00 PM

a higher source takes care of us, if we are tested now--let us be one in building a wonderful tomorrow.. ohh so fine, teddy! you give me hope..huggs

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/12/2017 2:42:00 PM

Ahh, yes! Working together is the only way to build a better tomorrow! Thank you so much Nette, for your visit, enjoying my piece and commenting on it. *^_^*

Grace Mutindi

Date: 7/11/2017 10:19:00 AM

A very good one Teddy!! What’s happening in the world is really sad, but where there’s life...hope exists!!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/12/2017 2:35:00 PM

Greetings, Grace. Yes, there is so much happening right now not worth talking home about. Well, as you said, there's hope for us as long as we exist. Man must Live. Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/9/2017 9:31:00 AM

That day will come soon enough, Teddy. In this troubled world, one finds the best friend on one's knees:) Nice write my friend:)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/9/2017 11:36:00 AM

You're right, Daniel. Sometimes each one of us has his/her time to feel as though the soul is ripping apart. Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece! :-)