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Sorry

by Michael J Falotico I never meant to hurt you. A day I can't take back. My intentions never seen. So many missed chances sailed out to sea. Only to let our love drift apart. Rules I was too young to understand. Rain that fell washed me away. Your smile stays in a place that only I see. ~~To an old friend~~

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/29/2011 1:34:00 AM

Very nice write! I will be checking out your stuff on a more regular basis now. I have marked you down. I have not been on here much due to nose 2 the grind. (just finished a book) You have excellent meter and flow. 7rate, may strike word "that" if publishing. But excellent. I mean it! ~JSLambert

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 4/5/2011 3:21:00 PM

Hello Michael, Yes, I think we all can relate to this and trying to apologize for things in the past still brought forward....Gosh this New year has been an up and down one it seems. Thank you for your kind comments, he was my brother in law but more like a brother....... Love, Shar

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/5/2011 6:55:00 AM

I hope this old friend forgives you Michael.. Most importantly I hope you forgive yourself, 'cause ultimately that is what will give us the freedom to move on and just embrace the good memories.. beautiful heartfelt write... love WNN

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/4/2011 12:42:00 PM

very touchy and moving with apt images of atonement, Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 4/4/2011 10:35:00 AM

I pray that this "friend" may read his awesome Acrostic dear poet...It made me happy to read the thoughts of a poet ! Have a great week sir ! Much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 10:22:00 AM

I see you all found some inspiration while I was not at the Soup this weekend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Michael. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 7:07:00 PM

Well so touching and adorable are the words of this beautiful Acrostic with apology intact luv.. am sure old friend appreciated this one.. your words flow and the inner soul shines through the lines so clearly luv.. such romance .. such deep emotion.. such feeling .. as only my W.K. can provide.. your Jersey Girl in awe mode from u luv.. always and forever...

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2011 2:24:00 PM

It made me want to cry, dear Michael, so full of deep sadness~~