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Tiny little birds perched on cattail stems Enjoy the swings gentle breeze brings them I aim my phone for a picture Off they fly, irked at the gesture Pardon me birdies, for creating mayhem Written : 07/17/2016 Contest:"One Stanza-One Only" by Broken Wings

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Date: 7/22/2016 1:12:00 AM
Neat! Congrats on your win, Sara.
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Date: 7/21/2016 8:15:00 PM
This is so cute, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 7/20/2016 8:07:00 PM
Oh, very sweet, Sara. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2016 4:48:00 PM
A sweet and delightful limerick, Sara:) Congratulations on this fine podium finish! // paul
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/20/2016 11:04:00 AM
Congrats Sara on this wonderful win with these excellent lines. Sunita. :D
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Date: 7/20/2016 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, well done...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/20/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Charlie,I don't reach the 2nd often:)
Date: 7/19/2016 11:46:00 PM
Subtle embroidery of beauty ...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/20/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation Probir!
Date: 7/19/2016 10:01:00 PM
Nicely composed limerick. Congratulations for your impressive 2nd place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/20/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Jesse,I loved your poem 'Unaware' !
Date: 7/19/2016 3:53:00 PM
This a cute Limerick, Sara, shame on you for causing mayhem :) congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/20/2016 8:35:00 AM
Haha, I should've known better Eve:)Loved your imagery in the 'Ocean'.
Date: 7/19/2016 3:44:00 PM
Sara, very cute lady! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/20/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Laura,your poem Mother Nature is such a delight!
Date: 7/14/2016 4:00:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Cute one ..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/15/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Sara,looking forward to reading more of your poems!
Date: 7/14/2016 10:16:00 AM
This one is cute.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/15/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thanks:)
Date: 7/14/2016 9:05:00 AM
Lovely sara;)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/15/2016 3:15:00 PM
thanks for your kind comments Madhupriya!
Date: 7/14/2016 9:00:00 AM
made me smile Sara lovely imagery, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/15/2016 3:15:00 PM
thanks Jan,never can get a picture of them!