Sara Chansarkar Poet Limerick

Sorry,Birds

Tiny little birds perched on cattail stems
Enjoy the swings gentle breeze brings them
I aim my phone for a picture
Off they fly, irked at the gesture
Pardon me birdies, for creating mayhem

Written : 07/17/2016
Contest:"One Stanza-One Only" by Broken Wings

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Karam Misra July 22, 2016 at 1:12 AM Neat! Congrats on your win, Sara.

Kim Merryman July 21, 2016 at 8:15 PM This is so cute, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Sandra Haight July 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM Oh, very sweet, Sara. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus July 20, 2016 at 4:48 PM A sweet and delightful limerick, Sara:) Congratulations on this fine podium finish! // paul

Bl Devnath July 20, 2016 at 1:07 PM Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon July 20, 2016 at 11:04 AM Congrats Sara on this wonderful win with these excellent lines. Sunita. :D

Charlie Smith July 20, 2016 at 6:37 AM Congratulations Sara, well done... Sara Chansarkar July 20, 2016 at 8:31 AM Thanks Charlie,I don't reach the 2nd often:)

Probir Gupta July 19, 2016 at 11:46 PM Subtle embroidery of beauty ... Sara Chansarkar July 20, 2016 at 8:32 AM Thanks for the appreciation Probir!

Jesse Day July 19, 2016 at 10:01 PM Nicely composed limerick. Congratulations for your impressive 2nd place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse Sara Chansarkar July 20, 2016 at 8:34 AM Thanks Jesse,I loved your poem 'Unaware' !

Eve Roper July 19, 2016 at 3:53 PM This a cute Limerick, Sara, shame on you for causing mayhem :) congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Sara Chansarkar July 20, 2016 at 8:35 AM Haha, I should've known better Eve:)Loved your imagery in the 'Ocean'.

Beautiful Scars July 19, 2016 at 3:44 PM Sara, very cute lady! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Sara Chansarkar July 20, 2016 at 8:36 AM Thanks Laura,your poem Mother Nature is such a delight!

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2016 at 4:00 PM Ahhh!!! Cute one ..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Sara Chansarkar July 15, 2016 at 3:16 PM Thanks Sara,looking forward to reading more of your poems!

Salma Suri July 14, 2016 at 10:16 AM This one is cute. Sara Chansarkar July 15, 2016 at 3:15 PM Thanks:)

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 14, 2016 at 9:05 AM Lovely sara;) Sara Chansarkar July 15, 2016 at 3:15 PM thanks for your kind comments Madhupriya!

Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 9:00 AM made me smile Sara lovely imagery, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Sara Chansarkar July 15, 2016 at 3:15 PM thanks Jan,never can get a picture of them!