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Sorrow Situations

There was a woman with a heart of malice, drowning her sorrows within a chalice Weep not, brighter days are ahead Truth sinks in as she lies in bed The loud cries of her name echo, "Alice"?

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:07:00 PM

Jaquay Atkins, wonderful poem. skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 10:18:00 PM

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Jaquay Atkins
Date: 4/19/2016 11:15:00 AM

Thank u much . And most definitely I will be reading and commenting on your poems. And I don't think any poem is perfect, but I think each poem perfectly fits the personality of the person who writes it.