Barbara Gorelick Poet Quintain (English)

Sorrow Five Lines

I am alone on a sea of sorrow
No beacon  of light from the shore
Unable to see the face of tomorrow
Your eyes tell me love is no more
Broken pieces of life I cannot restore

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Robert Lindley July 16, 2015 at 7:17 PM WHAT A FANTASTIC FIVE! Great write my friend. Areal joy to read! A7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2015 at 4:45 AM Great poetry Barbara n awesome win! Big congrats!

Skat A June 30, 2015 at 10:52 PM nice

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2015 at 10:53 AM I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. A very sad topic though. Congrats on your win …Sara Barbara Gorelick June 30, 2015 at 10:06 PM Thank you Sara, I enjoyed this contest..the poem is mostly poetic license although I think weve all had those moments...BG

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2015 at 10:22 PM this is indeed a great metaphorical. One of my favorites so far on the list. Congrats for the win. Barbara Gorelick June 30, 2015 at 10:06 PM thank you dear, appreciate your owrds so much. Barbara

Viv Wigley June 28, 2015 at 3:29 AM Yes, I think we've all been adrift at one time or another. Lovely little piece, Barbara. #7. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2015 at 2:37 AM Anyone who has suffered heartbreak can relate to this poignant piece, beautifully expressed Barbara. 7