Sorrow Drowns On Dry Land

Sorrow drowns on dry land 


Standing at a distance,
staring at staggered lines 
on a rock face outcropping
buried deep beneath 
an ancient rose garden

Corroded iron bars
chained and bolted,
left for dead as brittle petals
find a funnel cloud forming
and dance in a whirlwind mosaic

Disguised bold lettering
of forgotten fonts curl and peel 
as bark from a crying birch tree
waits for spring 
so it can start anew

Sunlight smears blue sky dreams 
in finger paint colors
designing the moment
in portraits of a heart – this heart
basking in your glow

And as your smile approaches
the earth rejoices, pine tree party hats,
hibiscus streamers wave
as a happy ending reigns
at the conclusion of this poem – 

with the deceptive title
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Games of the mind, I thought this was heading for a downward plunge, but you took us to heights again with your lovely happy ending celebrated with hibiscus streamers. How beautiful...Maria.
Green Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 9:02 AM
I am happy your downward trek turned into an uplifting experience. ;) Thank you my friend.
White Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 1:29 PM
You really like to play games with the innocent reader, don't you, don't you! :)
Green Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Who me? You must have me confused with another Chris Green. :) Thanks so much Darren.
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July 11, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Haha, I love this, Chris! You do have a way with words, my friend! Wonderfully written
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July 11, 2017 at 1:50 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Just kind of lost my way there at the end. :)
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July 11, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Oh ho.. another wonderful offering to the soup! Lovely piece :) xomo
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July 11, 2017 at 1:50 PM
Thanks so very much Maureen. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
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July 11, 2017 at 12:16 PM
Love the last verse and the twisted ending! <3
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July 11, 2017 at 12:24 PM
Thank you Kim. Just having a little fun.
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July 11, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Oh my word, the emotional roller coaster! First had me wanting to cry... especially getting to the birch tree line...Phew, thank you for the beautiful ending ! Love the line pine tree party hats! That made me smile :)
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July 11, 2017 at 11:59 AM
I am glad you liked it Heidi. I thought I'd mix it up a bit. :)
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