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Sorrow Drowns On Dry Land

Sorrow drowns on dry land Standing at a distance, staring at staggered lines on a rock face outcropping buried deep beneath an ancient rose garden Corroded iron bars chained and bolted, left for dead as brittle petals find a funnel cloud forming and dance in a whirlwind mosaic Disguised bold lettering of forgotten fonts curl and peel as bark from a crying birch tree waits for spring so it can start anew Sunlight smears blue sky dreams in finger paint colors designing the moment in portraits of a heart – this heart basking in your glow And as your smile approaches the earth rejoices, pine tree party hats, hibiscus streamers wave as a happy ending reigns at the conclusion of this poem – with the deceptive title

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Date: 7/13/2017 5:18:00 AM
Games of the mind, I thought this was heading for a downward plunge, but you took us to heights again with your lovely happy ending celebrated with hibiscus streamers. How beautiful...Maria.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/13/2017 9:02:00 AM
I am happy your downward trek turned into an uplifting experience. ;) Thank you my friend.
Date: 7/12/2017 1:29:00 PM
You really like to play games with the innocent reader, don't you, don't you! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 1:37:00 PM
Who me? You must have me confused with another Chris Green. :) Thanks so much Darren.
Date: 7/11/2017 1:20:00 PM
Haha, I love this, Chris! You do have a way with words, my friend! Wonderfully written
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Just kind of lost my way there at the end. :)
Date: 7/11/2017 12:29:00 PM
Oh ho.. another wonderful offering to the soup! Lovely piece :) xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thanks so very much Maureen. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 7/11/2017 12:16:00 PM
Love the last verse and the twisted ending! <3
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Just having a little fun.
Date: 7/11/2017 11:09:00 AM
Oh my word, the emotional roller coaster! First had me wanting to cry... especially getting to the birch tree line...Phew, thank you for the beautiful ending ! Love the line pine tree party hats! That made me smile :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 11:59:00 AM
I am glad you liked it Heidi. I thought I'd mix it up a bit. :)

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