Sorrow

Light fades fast into darkness, forever a word of past
Hope hides helpless now, in the midst of this turmoil
Lost lonely sorrow, no pleasure, for now nor morrow 

Better days will come, to this it's taught stay steadfast
Covered by black storm clouds, faith continues loyal
Light fades fast into darkness, forever a word of past

Happiness of youth, an idea we temporarily borrowed
Time moves fast making body, soul and heart spoil
Lost lonely sorrow, no pleasure, for now nor morrow

A day will come when we will have to face our sorrow
We look, examine our lives, many, sadly left to recoil
Light fades fast into darkness, forever a word of past

To one end, weak or strong, we all do tend to follow
For that purpose, all strive, search, conspire and toil
Lost lonely sorrow, no pleasure, for now nor morrow

Finding meaning in life, a quest that is never shallow
However it's always elusive, at times angers to a boil
Light fades fast into darkness, forever a word of past
Lost lonely sorrow, no pleasure, for now nor morrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/20/2013 11:24:00 AM
I don't know much about this , but I like it. I don't know what you need to fix. it looks good to me. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:34:00 AM
Haha, and I talk about other people breaking form. This isn't in form, just look and it's obvious, in fact, the quatrain doesn't even have two rhyming lines. I must quote Homer Simpson DOPPPPP, lol. I need to fix this mess lol.
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 3/15/2013 11:52:00 AM
Ok shallow and morrow are a near rhyme.
Date: 2/13/2013 5:54:00 AM
Im sorry to read one comes to terms, with shunning out all lights. Some how some where... Wayland, better days will come for you... do not let the darkness cover the true meaning of life....enjoyed. ..linda
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/13/2013 5:21:00 PM
Thanks PD for you lovely comment on the poem and inspirtation. I really value your words.
Date: 2/12/2013 10:24:00 AM
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/13/2013 5:19:00 PM
Well I know that you read my poem. I guess that's a reply of excitement. I want to think you for reading.
Date: 2/12/2013 8:09:00 AM
Wayland I like the form and your message...David
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/13/2013 5:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment and sorry it took me a while to reply.
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