Sorrow

O my love and passion! And looks and glamour’s obsession May you know upfront! From teeth of time’s termite Spared alone is sorrow

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Date: 11/6/2012 3:10:00 PM

gosh, how did I ever miss this one. I really enjoyed this one. The last line is incredible.

Date: 10/27/2012 5:58:00 AM

Beautiful tanka, my friend! Cheers, Jack

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/6/2012 5:11:00 PM

The words of praise coming from you has filled me with joy. Thank you.

Date: 10/26/2012 7:42:00 PM

Mohammad, a deep sad image.., thank you for sharing your wonderful tanka, Good night*PD

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/6/2012 5:02:00 PM

Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka. I am so grateful. Love

Date: 10/26/2012 5:16:00 PM

Thank you for your beautiful poem Mohammad. Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/6/2012 4:52:00 PM

Thanks for your lavish praise, Anne! You are so kind.