Sorrow

O my love and passion!
And looks and glamour’s obsession
May you know upfront!
From teeth of time’s termite
Spared alone is sorrow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 3:10 PM
gosh, how did I ever miss this one. I really enjoyed this one. The last line is incredible.
Ellison Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Beautiful tanka, my friend! Cheers, Jack
Yamin Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 5:11 PM
The words of praise coming from you has filled me with joy. Thank you.
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October 26, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Mohammad, a deep sad image.., thank you for sharing your wonderful tanka, Good night*PD
Yamin Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 5:02 PM
Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka. I am so grateful. Love
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 5:16 PM
Thank you for your beautiful poem Mohammad. Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Yamin Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 4:52 PM
Thanks for your lavish praise, Anne! You are so kind.
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