Sorrow

I sleep when i clear all the fights
But little did i know 
It was still in my sight
My head starts spinning 
To the lemons life is giving
I don't wanna "try" anymore
I know i can't and i don't wanna score
Sorry that i can't bragged about 
Once I'm done everyone is out
I say I'm done with everything i face
But that one moment resumes the race
I'm holding onto the rope too tight
That my hands are red and my eyes in fright
Still there is a hope inside 
That i lend my thoughts a peaceful night
I know i don't make you proud
But now i can say it out loud 
I know all my flaws and i accept them. 
But,nothing i can do to change them.
well have you tried? did u really give up?
I just wanna try but I don't wanna stay up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Kaur Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Wow! Admirable verse.
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