Caryl Ramsdale Poet Dodoitsu

Sorceress Sibyl Simmers

Prophetic powers draw dark
eyes toward opportunity
hidden in ball of fire
predicting future.

Sibyl speaks.  Boldly foretells
her lift over the threshold
and willfully conjures a
hunk of burning love.

Graceful, posing hands present
a strikingly handsome face
uplifted—scrutinizing
the love of his life.



Caryl Ramsdale
Copyright © 2011  All rights reserved.
Dodoitsu Poetry Form

September 6, 2011

"CRYSTAL BALL" poetry contest sponsored  by Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

~ 1st Place ~
9/18/2011

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Sara Kendrick September 20, 2011 at 4:08 PM Congrats on your win...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown September 20, 2011 at 10:15 AM Congratulations on your win Caryl. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2011 at 12:09 AM amazing angle for the theme, caryl...heartfelt congrats on your award winning treasure… top of the heap!.. huggs!

John Freeman September 19, 2011 at 1:29 PM Caryl, Great to see your worthy poem at the top. Great to see a first place win for you. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2011 at 8:54 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Caryl Caryl Ramsdale September 19, 2011 at 8:57 AM Thank You! CR

David Williams September 19, 2011 at 3:21 AM Caryl congrats on your well deserved win..David Caryl Ramsdale September 19, 2011 at 8:57 AM Thanks David! CR

Bob Quigley September 19, 2011 at 12:52 AM Congratulations on your 1st place win Caryl. Well deserved. Caryl Ramsdale September 19, 2011 at 8:58 AM Thank you very much Bob! CR

Dinda Minardi September 18, 2011 at 11:33 PM congratulations on your win! :) Caryl Ramsdale September 19, 2011 at 8:59 AM Dinda, Thank you! CR

Lee Ramage September 18, 2011 at 10:49 PM Congratulations and good luck with the hunk!! Save some for me! Lee Caryl Ramsdale September 19, 2011 at 8:59 AM Hi Lee, Thank you! CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 9:12 PM CONGRATS CARYL ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS INTRIGUING POETRY LUV.. Caryl Ramsdale September 19, 2011 at 8:56 AM Linda-Marie: I’m thrilled to have received a place of honor in your enchanting "CRYSTAL BALL" poetry contest. Thank you! Competitions created by you always seem so alluring that I’ve noticed the poets/poetesses do their best to enter early to race for the placement finish. Wishing you a delightful time judging your new contest "BELL, BOOK AND CANDLE". CR

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2011 at 1:30 PM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Good luck in Linda-Marie's contest...Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest.Sara Caryl Ramsdale September 8, 2011 at 6:16 PM Thanks Judy! CR Caryl Ramsdale September 8, 2011 at 6:15 PM Thanks Sara! CR Judy Ball September 8, 2011 at 12:07 PM Very nice my friend. A winner for sure. Good luck God Bless, JB

Jack Horne September 6, 2011 at 5:50 PM Love this one - a sure winner, my friend Caryl Ramsdale September 8, 2011 at 6:14 PM This poem was a fun write for me. Almost Halloweenish...lol Thanks! CR

S.Jagathsimhan Nair September 6, 2011 at 9:53 AM thanks for stopping by and commenting..this one of yours looks top-notch..good wishes , jag Caryl Ramsdale September 6, 2011 at 10:06 AM Thanks always appreciate your coments my friend. CR

David Williams September 6, 2011 at 9:53 AM hey Caryl very good and very clever.. love it good luck, might withdraw mine and have a rethink, ha ha ..David Caryl Ramsdale September 6, 2011 at 10:10 AM Thanks for stopping by David. Have another creative day filled with blessings. CR