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Sophistication

Merlot wine
Kraft single slices
Dead roses not watered
Dead dreams unfulfilled

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Casarah Nance

Date: 1/10/2015 8:31:00 AM

Nicely said... cheers

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/11/2015 4:15:00 PM

Yes I thought to myself, what a krafty poem!!!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 1/4/2015 12:37:00 AM

Not sure if I'd call "Kraft single slices" very sophisticated, as much as eccentric! I have just one rule about cheese: if you can see your own reflection in it, don't eat it. There's a touch of sadness to this piece... who drinks fine wine while nibbling on fake cheese... a man who has been stood up on a date, perhaps?

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/4/2015 12:38:00 AM

Well Well if you read "My telephone" you'd see your not far off the mark! LOL

Terrell Martin

Date: 1/3/2015 6:39:00 PM

Arthur, thanks again for dropping by my site earlier and giving me more to chew on (poetically speaking) regarding this genre of poetic "Sophistication" (pun intended/judgment suspended): Translation: this is cool stuff dude. And like Jan before me I think the Kraft cheese is the coup de 'taut of this poetic beauty. Cheers, Terry

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 10:04:00 PM

Thanks Terrell :)