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Sophistication

Merlot wine Kraft single slices Dead roses not watered Dead dreams unfulfilled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Casarah Nance
Date: 1/10/2015 8:31:00 AM
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Nicely said... cheers
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/11/2015 4:15:00 PM
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Yes I thought to myself, what a krafty poem!!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 1/4/2015 12:37:00 AM
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Not sure if I'd call "Kraft single slices" very sophisticated, as much as eccentric! I have just one rule about cheese: if you can see your own reflection in it, don't eat it. There's a touch of sadness to this piece... who drinks fine wine while nibbling on fake cheese... a man who has been stood up on a date, perhaps?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/4/2015 12:38:00 AM
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Well Well if you read "My telephone" you'd see your not far off the mark! LOL
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Terrell Martin
Date: 1/3/2015 6:39:00 PM
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Arthur, thanks again for dropping by my site earlier and giving me more to chew on (poetically speaking) regarding this genre of poetic "Sophistication" (pun intended/judgment suspended): Translation: this is cool stuff dude. And like Jan before me I think the Kraft cheese is the coup de 'taut of this poetic beauty. Cheers, Terry
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 10:04:00 PM
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Thanks Terrell :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2015 12:56:00 PM
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I prefer a nice piece of stilton my friend instead of plastic cheese - that line made me smile lol - great write:-) Hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 10:01:00 PM
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Thank you Jan!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/2/2015 7:57:00 AM
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I love the title "sophistication" *lol*. The best line is the "Kraft Single slice", it seems out of place and yet is perfect.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 9:53:00 PM
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That was exactly my thought!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 5:52:00 AM
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put some lemonade in the water, sure the roses will revive. in your spiced rum as welll....yummy.......Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 9:53:00 PM
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LOL , after the spiced rum the hell with the roses!
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Meg Anderson
Date: 1/1/2015 11:40:00 PM
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Lol kraft singles are my favorite! Nice!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 9:51:00 PM
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You a classy lady!!!

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