Sophistication 3

Mars bars fried in pairs Spiced rum and knickers bared Blonde heart fondles soul Canadian maple leaf scores a goal!

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Casarah Nance

Date: 1/10/2015 8:34:00 AM

Great!!! :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/11/2015 4:12:00 PM

Thanks Cas!!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 12:50:00 PM

Not too many Snickers or she wont fit in her knickers - glad they scored hope you do too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 11:15:00 PM

I wish more women thought like you Jan Hugs xoxo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/2/2015 8:22:00 AM

A new year miracle! "The Toronto maple leafs score a goal", were they playing the Canadiens??

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 11:01:00 PM

That's just so mean!!!!! and the Habs will win the cup, it might be in 2025, but they will win!!!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/2/2015 5:46:00 AM

would rather a snicker or two cut up in slices would share with you or maybe a raspberry ruffle music playing, shall we dance or shuffle ..............Seren

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/2/2015 3:47:00 AM

Very nice pen Arthur ! I enjoyed reading your piece my dear friend. A 7 from me!Thank you for sharing it dear friend.Wish you a happy new year 2015! Have a very lovely day :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/3/2015 10:45:00 PM

Ok Dorian but next time, I want an A8 ok? xoxo