Sophistication 3

Mars bars fried in pairs
Spiced rum and knickers bared
Blonde heart fondles soul
Canadian maple leaf scores a goal!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Great!!! :)
Vaso Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Thanks Cas!!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Not too many Snickers or she wont fit in her knickers - glad they scored hope you do too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 11:15 PM
I wish more women thought like you Jan Hugs xoxo
Roberts Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 5:46 AM
would rather a snicker or two cut up in slices would share with you or maybe a raspberry ruffle music playing, shall we dance or shuffle ..............Seren
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Very nice pen Arthur ! I enjoyed reading your piece my dear friend. A 7 from me!Thank you for sharing it dear friend.Wish you a happy new year 2015! Have a very lovely day :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Vaso Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Ok Dorian but next time, I want an A8 ok? xoxo
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