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Soothing Serenity

The morning sky glows in rays of nature's lamp The sun-lit earth gives a cheery smile in its charm A baby calf drinking milk from mama's udder; Tiny yellow common grass butterflies fluttering around in open green grasslands; Paddy plants sparkling pearls of dew drops at sunrise; The three-striped bushy tailed little palm squirrels scurrying around the trees in search of nuts; Small pale-billed flower pecker birds on tree twigs swaying gently to the rhythm of soft morning breeze. As I see the vibrance of nature, yet feel its lull during my morning walk amidst nature through the idyllic countryside, my wearied mind is refreshed and nurtured - the soothing tunes of serenity serenading my soul in a moment of love and peace Date: 10/20/2021 Let's Mix It Up Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Valsa George

Date: 11/11/2021 4:03:00 AM

A beautiful poem on the loveliness of Nature that gives serenity to the soul. Such country walks are so enjoyable and refreshing ! Well done Ani...

Constance La France

Date: 11/4/2021 2:44:00 PM

Ani, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/31/2021 6:45:00 PM

Dearest Ani, your tender and appreciative poem soothes and serenades my soul and imagination. Gratitude flows with expressive beauty from your gifted pen. I adore your inspiring imagery, especially; “The morning sky glows in rays of nature’s lamp” - simply splendid! I relished walking through these moments of love and peace with you, my sweet friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/31/2021 12:18:00 AM

Beautiful nature scene! "wearied mind is refreshed and nurtured" - Great! Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/22/2021 7:18:00 PM

Truly enjoyed this poem with serene description of nature in countryside! Wonderful imagism in the second stanza unfolding a charming sun-lit morning in details. Anitha, this makes me long to go back to my childhood in the lap of nature. Love and blessings, Dear Friend ~ Mala

Mike Bayles

Date: 10/21/2021 8:28:00 PM

I feel vey peaceful reading this poem.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/21/2021 9:54:00 AM

Wow impressive way nature scenes portrayed in poetic observations. I love squirrels and miss them here. I Recall village scenes of calfs drinking yeahh. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too .^^^^^^^<<<<<<<>>>>>>•°»

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/20/2021 7:15:00 PM

Ani, you carefully performed an excellent job with your creative writing abilities. You've properly produced a genuinely brilliant job of drawing outdoor sceneries. While I discover your poem, I could perceive the images emerging in my subconscious mind as I wade through it. I sincerely wish you all the best.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2021 4:53:00 PM

You did a fantastic job with descriptive writing, Ani. Was it free verse you used for your bottom section. You can write "free verse" used in third stanza if you want. I used tanka and made note of it, but I guess it's not a requirement

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/20/2021 5:42:00 AM

Nature images wonderfully painted, Ani--I saw the scenes unfold through your words as I read your poem. All the best.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2021 2:26:00 AM

I'm sure this will rate high. There is a vibration in your poetic composition.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 10/19/2021 6:22:00 PM

Ani, I loved walking with you through the serenity of nature and her creatures. Beautiful descriptions. Hugs and Blessings, Susan :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/19/2021 3:41:00 PM

Yes. Nature is another word for serenity in my book. Enjoyed. God bless you friend. Love, Gina