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Soothing Melody

She finds joy through the prism of love Basking in its caress and being coy Its melody soothing, like a cooing dove She finds joy through the prism of love A precious gift that shines from above Into love's light emotions deploy She finds joy through the prism of love Basking in its caress and being coy 5-21-2021 Try a Triolet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2021 8:12:00 AM

Congrats on this winner. Love does make everything feel and seem different. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 6/29/2021 9:12:00 PM

Wonderfully written Joseph, congratulations! ~Anna

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2021 2:33:00 PM

I can't believe I never spotted this one of yours yet, and also I see you got a win from a congratulations down here. Gosh, I really need to find this winner list and see all the other winners. VERY nicely done, Joseph!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2021 2:07:00 PM

thoughtful write here indeed

Judy Ball

Date: 5/27/2021 9:04:00 AM

Lovely Joseph. When one feels they are loved there is confidence and joy but when one feels there is no one who cares for them there is depression and a useless emptiness. Great write. God Bless, JB

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/27/2021 1:54:00 AM

Great entry, great poetry, Joseph, congratulations.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/25/2021 8:03:00 PM

Joseph, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2021 5:00:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Kim

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2021 1:07:00 PM

Wrapped in the colors of love. Most enchanting Joseph. I enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful week. Blessings xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2021 10:38:00 AM

I like the thought of a "prism of love," Joseph. It must be offering her some beautiful colors to help her find happiness. Best wishes for a win in Kim's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/23/2021 2:55:00 PM

Hi Joseph, You have penned such a lovely and romantic triolet. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day :-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2021 6:12:00 AM

Very romantic verse Joseph, wish you good luck in the contest. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/21/2021 5:30:00 PM

Finding joy- "through the prism of love" Such a beautiful thought. The entire poem brings a smile to my heart. It is a *Soothing Melody* indeed. :) Brandy