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Soothing Kaleidoscope

Written: February 10, 2025 For Brian Strand Contest *********************** In the tempestuous shadows of my soulful sphere I squirm in sorrow. I was wandering through whimsical woods, alive with hues and aromatic herbs. Yearning for a soothing serum, for my katabatic spirit. The earth reverberates with heartfelt echoes. as beneath the embroidery of my core, bleeding brilliant colors onto celestial heights, wrestling with the shimmering sheen of love's embrace amidst the turmoil. My soul swirls in a simmering cauldron of desires. Colliding with constellations and orbs at dusk, cradling the cardinal grief Like a potent elixir, meticulously concocted by the cosmos. Through thick fogs and dusky dimness, I craft my treasured dreams. into the breathing bounds, Wishing to mend the mighty fissures in life's lofty ledges with clarity and compassion. Wretched waves wail. within me as I whisper weary woes, chaotic cries cascade. in a cosmos that's both constant and concealed. I am a heart hungering. to heal from this havoc, Searching for serenity. in soothing scents, strolling beneath moons touched by tranquil tones, Yearning for peace. Love and loss are my sovereigns. Crowning me in thistles. and tints of myrrh The sun's wrathful gaze paints my sorrows crimson; Earth and soul collaborate. in this eternal quest for meaning. In the smoky caress of eucalyptus groves, I weep a kaleidoscope of human feelings— I'm aching for connection. yearning for understanding amidst the storms. Would that my heart could seal these wounds in ink as deep as oceans, as calm as moonlit cliffs.

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Date: 2/21/2025 12:10:00 PM
SP, I find this simply spectacular. It makes me feel as though I am on the edge of the Grand Canyon with wind, colors, and sentiments washing over me. The search for meaning in life is a difficult quest. I was recently reading a book by Carlos Castaneda and his answer seems to be that whatever path we are on will work for us provided our heart is in the right place. This is a very spiritual and poignant piece that feels as though taking a psychedelic trip, but I would not know except from what I've read. Just one thing that really got to me was how you use katabatic to describe your spirit. That is a lot like flying close to the ground, which has to be really exciting...something you could do while ridge soaring in a glider, though on the side of the terrain with rising air. Smiles for this brilliant piece. Not a chore, but rather a treat to read.
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Date: 2/11/2025 9:20:00 AM
Hello again, my friend, "Sir" Sotto. I never cease to be amazed at the exceptional level and use of your vocabulary intertwined with stupendously creative imagery from...well, only you know where the Muses comes from! Great poem but my fav line would have to be: " Earth and soul collaborate. in this eternal quest for meaning." Love-Love-Love it! Kudos & Bravos (As always):
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Date: 2/11/2025 4:47:00 AM
Hello Sotto, Yes, your words are a tempest of emotion, swirling with stark imagery and deep longing. It feels like a soul reaching through storm clouds, searching for the light of understanding. Truly a powerful and poignant piece. Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/10/2025 7:57:00 PM
I could see you in color, my friend. :) So much beauty in "ink as deep as oceans, as calm as moonlit cliffs. "
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