Soothe

In the moments before dusk   night in a struggle with the day   dreams they do say       dancing into reality   the red light district   flickers on high alert       she, backs into me   a soft velvet touch   embarking me involuntarily   to thrust     my chest closer   to those simple breaths   slow and so sweet   rendering me complete       here's where I dream   or so does it seem   a memory or want   to endow her my pride   an encompassing ride   stirring, echos in time       a morning of lust   urged to surface   thrive   brazen and bare   not coming up for air       spring undresses the moon     surrender takes many turns   lasting sips soothe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/19/2018 5:42:00 AM
Why do I feel I'm hiding behind the curtains of a red room? This is just so hot.
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Date: 3/18/2018 7:03:00 PM
mmmm... I love this enchanting moment ... a fav. Hugs
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:42:00 AM
Your fine approach to sensual and romantic poetry has lost none of its touch, Tim! Beautiful poetry. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/16/2018 1:37:00 PM
- I do not know anyone who speaks more passionately and clearly than your poems, Tim :) - Beautiful - (Spring can not undress the moon .... it's far too cold !!! :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2018 4:23:00 PM
I'm at work reading this and gosh all of sudden it got really warm in here... Lol! Fabulously sexy ;)
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Date: 3/15/2018 2:56:00 PM
phwoarh tim you are on fire with your imagery and I love that line spring undresses the moon ... :-) hugs Jan xx
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