George Aul Poet Tanka

Sooo Long

At this time of year,
I have a spring in my step;
the ladies do dress
in less and less coverings...
bare skin - worth the Winter's wait!



For "Wow Me in 5 Lines" contest sponsored by Francine Roberts.

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Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2011 at 10:56 PM wow! G.A., come to texas winter is snap of a finger away... well i guess that explains why we rush so much... nice write,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire April 27, 2011 at 3:17 PM The men wear less to, George. Parading around without T-shirts. Love to see those rippling muscles! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2011 at 12:58 PM george. please be sure it's entered.I see a note for you from the judge and I want to see this WIN

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2011 at 12:57 PM ZOWIE you wow me, this has GOT to be on the winners' list!!

James Foulk April 18, 2011 at 7:20 PM a great piece you wrote.

Francine Roberts April 18, 2011 at 3:59 PM not showing on the contest page as entered yet, please check and re-enter