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Soon To Sleep

The early mist hung heavy on the fen, its cold dampness filming my face with dew. A herd of legless cows slow floated by, attended by the churr of scalding wren. Overhead, a silent owl, hunting, flew; All while, the dog pressed closely to my thigh. The sun had yet to make its presence known pre-dawn, a spell for shadowless vague forms to lurk beyond the edge of ancient wood. Daylight would soon appear, the moon dethrone; with victory, the world about transforms. I do not wish this dawn, although I should.

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Date: 10/28/2022 12:44:00 PM
A beguiling poem Terry. ( I think I would welcome the morning if I were dreaming of legless cows flying by ! ). Well done.
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Date: 10/28/2022 12:33:00 PM
Terry, you have so beautifully created the scene before dawn when serenity blankets the new day and all around it. Love "moon dethrone." Also your rhyme scheme is so subtle and effortless - like the morning dew that washes your face. Even though I am not a morning person, when I do experience this time of day, it is an experience I remember fondly in its breathless anticipation. Blessings of serene mornings to you. Cheers!
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