Sonnets of Light

Soft vanilla sunshine,
Gleams it’s love on the horizon.
The essence of light echoes,
A pale radiance on the surface
Of tranquil waters.

The sun scribes vanillin verses to the sea,
Sonnets of light written on waters,
Romantic incantations grace the heaven’s, 
Painting a love beyond the aquatic seascape.

The soft surge writes back to the sun,
Reciting in verse through the pleasant soothing waves.
The evening sky and passing clouds blush, 
Witnessing the romance of the sun and sea.
In the rustic scene derived from the setting of the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/4/2009 3:52:00 PM
It would be nice to see the above words in a picture slideshow, i think it would be breathtaking >> nice verse Raul >> James
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Date: 11/3/2009 10:23:00 AM
you are making me hungry!!:) Beautiful though!!
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Date: 11/3/2009 1:46:00 AM
I do appreciate this poem, Raúl!!! Very romantic (I do believe that your Hispanic background is favouring that, too). "The sun scribes vanillin verses to the sea!" Very poetic, love it. Este es "one of my favorite" poemas. Cuidate y que tengas una buena semana, tú amigo Gert
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:36:00 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:03:00 AM
There is such passionate poetry in nature if we look with a keen eye. You have an eye of a romantic artist, Raul....finding things in the beauty of nature, that goes beyond what most people see. You are an artist with your words! This amazing work is an example. If only everyone could see with your eyes! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/1/2009 4:12:00 AM
Nicely done in a romantic voice. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/31/2009 11:35:00 PM
i love this love story,these emotions between the Sun and the Sea..the soft vanilla sunshine..light echoes..vanillin verses to the sea....the soft surge write back to the sun,that would be beautiful, those waves,i can nearly picture silver glistening through them..and gold reflecting on them..the evening says another story,,passion and blushing..hmm:)..This poem is one of your best,,going to my favs..excellent love story,,-Charma
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Date: 10/31/2009 11:24:00 PM
This is a sensory wonder, Raul! Gorgeous and delicious! Hugs, Donna
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