Sonnet: Special Moments

~ Sonnet: Special Moments (Sonnet) There are days when I want just to sit ‘round and during this time relax just doing nothing And from my porch enjoy views without frown It's nice to dream and let go of many things This day is nice and is not cold or warm Is a great day and the sky is nice blue No cloudy day no rain and not a storm There's nothing now to ruin this precious day I wish I do that in a day like this But I know I can't stay too long that way I want to remember good times ~ people I miss I see butterflies I'm having a great day I want to grab sheets and pen and write too and friends this is the way I'm feeling today. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyrigh@2008 October,29,2008

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Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 5/7/2016 9:55:00 PM

Such serenity, like a breath of fresh air. Wonderful write, great to see if featured.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/10/2016 5:04:00 PM

Thank you so very kindly Dineen,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/29/2015 5:06:00 AM

Beautiful. Those moments to just relax, reminisce, dream...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/29/2015 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly,Njeri,for stopping by and commenting on my poem.Much appreciated again,dear friend you're so sweet! Wishing you a very lovely Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/12/2008 9:01:00 AM

Dorian, I fear my last comment regarding my book was a little abrupt, What I meant was shoot me your address to my e-mail and I'll sign and mail you out a copy of my first book - It would be my pleasure to do so - I apologize if I seemed rude before that certainly wasn't my intention at all - God bless and let me know, michael

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/29/2015 6:31:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly,Michael,for stopping by and commenting on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Deneen White

Date: 11/8/2008 5:55:00 PM

life's special moments are precious indeed, take care D-ncye

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/29/2015 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly,Deneen,for stopping by and commenting on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) D. "

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/8/2008 1:32:00 PM

Dorian this is an excellent Sonnet - If you wish to further discuss my books my e-mail is antoinette2332@sbcglobal.net - Feel free to e-mail me at any time - God Bless

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/29/2015 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly,Michael,for stopping by and commenting on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) D. "

Michael Torres

Date: 11/7/2008 6:04:00 AM

Nice poem Dorian. Really enjoyed the beautiful day you described. God bless you Michael Torres.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/29/2015 6:29:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly,Michael,for stopping by and commenting on my poem.Much appreciated,dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) D. "