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Sonnet of Space and Time

I savor my precious, quantum bliss;
the vibration of the strings, echo Heaven’s kiss.  
In parallel worlds, are parallel lives; 
With them, I can identify.

I’ve passed through, many walls of stone; 
through countless lives, I have roamed.  
I’ve tasted every experience, 
I found, that some, I still lament.

A molecular epiphany, I have received.  
My life’s frustration, is appeased.
Pure energy, is what we are 
and we can visit, every star.

Quantum souls are limitless; 
join me and pursue your bliss.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2020 7:31:00 AM

The beauty and musicality of this verse make it such a wonderful read! Congratulations on becoming a lifetime member!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/28/2020 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Kim, stay well!

Eric Cohen

Date: 1/22/2020 2:58:00 PM

A true poet can write about quantum theory and the universe and make it meaningful and enjoyable, if not fun, as you have done here. Also loved Gili-ok and several others you've posted. Hope you don't mind I'm just getting around to reading. By the way, Gregory Barden also writes on space and quantum theory from time to time. And I've added one or two myself (as a cat person you might appreciate Schrodinger's Cat). Best to you.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/28/2020 5:24:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it Eric, will have to check out your poetry soon, again, as I'm having to help out a family member who is ill and haven't been on a lot lately. Thanks so much.

James Horn

Date: 5/9/2019 3:11:00 PM

Went to Epiphany Episcopal Church in Norfolk, VA long ago. Father Joe Buchanan was the priest.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/13/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thank you.

P.M. Richter

Date: 10/15/2018 11:46:00 AM

Beautiful wisdom my friend.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 12:22:00 PM

Thank you very much.

James Horn

Date: 7/23/2017 6:03:00 PM

Often it may be hard to tell, If time and space are parallel; When same direction spinning, Stability was in a new beginning. Jim Horn

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 12:23:00 PM

James I rarely get a poem in reply to my poem...but, thanks.

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/15/2018 11:54:00 AM

Nice.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/27/2017 2:24:00 AM

Interesting...thanks again.

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/3/2015 8:37:00 AM

ML, I concur with Robert's comment below. I know that both Robert and I enjoy writing sonnets too. Your write here on "Space and Time" is represented extraordinarily well by using the sonnet structure paradigm (My Opinion). I certainly like the tenor and feel of this sonnet + tactile and intellectual imagery you use so well: ". . . passed through, many walls of stone;" and "A molecular epiphany, . . ." -- some examples. Outstanding! A "7" + FAV. Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:43:00 PM

What can I say after that? Thank you, Gary.

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/13/2015 9:28:00 PM

Great sonnet.. Title snared me and glad that it did.. Creativity in this is off the charts.. A7 but deserves a super 10!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/14/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Robert...I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 3:47:00 AM

M.L.Kiser, WOW, this is surprising, I did not expect to enjoy a sonnet, as much as I have this one. I'm not a sonnet fan. Thank you for the lovely and romantic feed.. Love the way you transpire into other worlds, as one... Love the journey... LINDA

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/12/2015 4:00:00 AM

Thanks so much, Linda. I am so glad that it fed your soul. Since we are spirits in this material realm, I like to imagine what I could do, as a spirit.