M. L. Kiser Poet Sonnet

Sonnet of Space and Time

I savor my precious, quantum bliss;
the vibration of the strings, echo Heaven’s kiss.  
In parallel worlds, are parallel lives; 
With them, I can identify.

I’ve passed through, many walls of stone; 
through countless lives, I have roamed.  
I’ve tasted every experience, 
I found, that some, I still lament.

A molecular epiphany, I have received.  
My life’s frustration, is appeased.
Pure energy, is what we are 
and we can visit, every star.

Quantum souls are limitless; 
join me and pursue your bliss.


 

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Kim Rodrigues November 13, 2020 at 7:31 AM The beauty and musicality of this verse make it such a wonderful read! Congratulations on becoming a lifetime member! M. L. Kiser November 28, 2020 at 5:23 PM Thank you Kim, stay well!

Eric Cohen January 22, 2020 at 2:58 PM A true poet can write about quantum theory and the universe and make it meaningful and enjoyable, if not fun, as you have done here. Also loved Gili-ok and several others you've posted. Hope you don't mind I'm just getting around to reading. By the way, Gregory Barden also writes on space and quantum theory from time to time. And I've added one or two myself (as a cat person you might appreciate Schrodinger's Cat). Best to you. M. L. Kiser November 28, 2020 at 5:24 PM I'm glad you enjoyed it Eric, will have to check out your poetry soon, again, as I'm having to help out a family member who is ill and haven't been on a lot lately. Thanks so much.

James Horn May 9, 2019 at 3:11 PM Went to Epiphany Episcopal Church in Norfolk, VA long ago. Father Joe Buchanan was the priest. M. L. Kiser May 13, 2019 at 3:39 PM Thank you.

Paul Marc October 15, 2018 at 11:46 AM Beautiful wisdom my friend. M. L. Kiser October 15, 2018 at 12:22 PM Thank you very much.

James Horn July 23, 2017 at 6:03 PM Often it may be hard to tell, If time and space are parallel; When same direction spinning, Stability was in a new beginning. Jim Horn M. L. Kiser October 15, 2018 at 12:23 PM James I rarely get a poem in reply to my poem...but, thanks. Paul Marc October 15, 2018 at 11:54 AM Nice. M. L. Kiser July 27, 2017 at 2:24 AM Interesting...thanks again.

Gary Bateman May 3, 2015 at 8:37 AM ML, I concur with Robert's comment below. I know that both Robert and I enjoy writing sonnets too. Your write here on "Space and Time" is represented extraordinarily well by using the sonnet structure paradigm (My Opinion). I certainly like the tenor and feel of this sonnet + tactile and intellectual imagery you use so well: ". . . passed through, many walls of stone;" and "A molecular epiphany, . . ." -- some examples. Outstanding! A "7" + FAV. Best Always, Gary M. L. Kiser May 5, 2015 at 3:43 PM What can I say after that? Thank you, Gary.

Robert Lindley April 13, 2015 at 9:28 PM Great sonnet.. Title snared me and glad that it did.. Creativity in this is off the charts.. A7 but deserves a super 10! M. L. Kiser April 14, 2015 at 9:00 AM Thank you, Robert...I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2015 at 3:47 AM M.L.Kiser, WOW, this is surprising, I did not expect to enjoy a sonnet, as much as I have this one. I'm not a sonnet fan. Thank you for the lovely and romantic feed.. Love the way you transpire into other worlds, as one... Love the journey... LINDA M. L. Kiser April 12, 2015 at 4:00 AM Thanks so much, Linda. I am so glad that it fed your soul. Since we are spirits in this material realm, I like to imagine what I could do, as a spirit.

Emile Pinet April 11, 2015 at 2:20 PM This is a surreal journey into a fantasy inspired by a poetic muse. Emile. M. L. Kiser April 12, 2015 at 4:01 AM I appreciate your kind comments, Emile.

Hannington Mumo April 11, 2015 at 12:52 AM Great work...I like your choice of words...#7 M. L. Kiser April 12, 2015 at 4:01 AM Thank you, so much, for your compliment.

Debbie Guzzi April 10, 2015 at 10:35 PM I have to say- you propose something I'd like to believe ;) Light & Love M. L. Kiser April 12, 2015 at 4:02 AM Thank you, Debbie.

Nette Onclaud April 9, 2015 at 1:26 AM i am blown away by this majestic, outer-world connection of bodymind with cosmic energy... beautiful, ML.. huggs M. L. Kiser April 10, 2015 at 4:37 PM Wow, Thanks so much Nette. I'm so glad you stopped by to read and comment.

Eve Roper April 8, 2015 at 6:20 PM Beautiful piece,wonderful write. Blessings dear friend Eve M. L. Kiser April 10, 2015 at 4:37 PM Thank you Eve. I appreciate the wonderful comments.

James Fraser April 8, 2015 at 3:02 PM Love this MLK, and yes it's our wish to pursue each others bliss. To my fav's, fine poetry indeed, double hugs for this one, James :) :) M. L. Kiser April 10, 2015 at 4:38 PM Thanks again,James. I'm glad you found a fav.

Paul Callus April 8, 2015 at 2:49 PM Quantum souls and Quantum bliss make life worth living. You write a lovely sonnet that looks ahead with a positive outlook. #7 // paul M. L. Kiser April 10, 2015 at 4:39 PM Many thanks, Paul. We are more than we seem and have access to more than we know, sometimes. Glad that you stopped by again.

Sara Kendrick April 8, 2015 at 9:25 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..My energy has gotten up gone though..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara M. L. Kiser April 8, 2015 at 12:42 PM Thank you, Sara. I always appreciate your kind comments and I hope that your energy returns soon.

Ravi Sathasivam April 8, 2015 at 2:58 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs M. L. Kiser April 8, 2015 at 3:04 AM Many thanks, I am glad that you enjoyed it.