Sonnet 44 'Nobody Wants a Well, When There Is Sadness'

Nobody wants a well, when there is sadness...
A few drops are enough, to bring on rain!
The world is full, of sorrow, and of madness!
Nobody needs the bottom of the drain...
The purists count emPHASis and sylLABles!
They like to see beans laid out, in a row!
They have no patience with an one, who babbles!
Believe the Sun should not put on a show!
But... we need purists, for they keep us clean!
Demand a higher standard of the lazy!
They state:  'it's not enough to be serene!'
(And unneeded enjambment
Drives 'em crazy!)
But we can only meet their standards, if
The while we write, we're clinging to a cliff!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Shaw Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Sonnets maketh or killeth, nicely penned . . . ; )
Fairchild Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 4:04 AM
He thanketh thee, who did pen the sonnet, which is my Self
Ravidas Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Perfect! I said, perfect sonnet! Perfectly done, Andrew.
Fairchild Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Thank you kindly!
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