Sonnet 2013

I raised my pen in hope of a new thought,
When an idea struck me much joy it brought,
As a sonnet i wish to carry forth,
In dark some night, it shines bright as a torch;

If only love could be a fairytale, 
On a beautiful yacht we both would sail,
Under the starry heavens filled with stars,
Deep in thoughts thinking about how you are;

I turn to you and gaze into your eyes, 
To know that love is not another lie,
A sonnet i completed with much ease,
I felt relieve as love would never cease...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/12/2010 3:58:00 PM
Good job..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Krystal. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:53:00 AM
KRYSTEL, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:51:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! K.A., CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/12/2010 2:15:00 PM
Krystel, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Krystel what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:18:00 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:31:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Krystal. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2010 11:53:00 PM
thanks seeyam and Dr. Ram.. =)
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Date: 4/11/2010 3:54:00 PM
Hi Krystel, I'm not sure but I think you might have forgotten to include the last two lines. Although I don't write much romantic sonnets, they really bring love to life. Thanks
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:30:00 PM
Well penned poem. Enjoyed it
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:32:00 AM
Please give yourself the credit you deserve, Krystel. This is a lovely poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:09:00 AM
thanks linda and carolyn.. =)
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:03:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/9/2010 8:54:00 AM
Enjoyed the uplifting quality of your poem, Krystel! Perhaps there are some "fairytale" romances out there after all! Love, Carolyn
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