Songs of Summer Swallows

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~ Enterered on June 16, 2023 into the Bite Size No 66 Contest ~

~ sponsored by Line Gauthier ~

I hear serenading songs of summer swallows and ruffling feathers of roosting starlings. I catch the sweet scent of heirloom roses that have not yet budded upon the bush. All these things I know have been given to me as surely as I see you standing before my eyes.

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2023 1:55:00 AM

wow Lin this is exquisite, the imagery and use of alliteration is so lovely and the ending is perfect - what a wonderful world! hugs jan , oh and many congrats on your win! xx