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Songs of Soul COS No 14: AABB

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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Couplet

Inspired: 2023 December 02

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To frigid-freed heartbeats, lover's behalf, of mindless blind mute who came from Flagstaff. Clueless inceptions nebulously grow, Godsend occasion leaves the dark to glow, sparks the light of life mimic frames of minds. Emotions indulge past regret unwinds, intricacies of distinctions arcane. Scattered, detached, night candle burns the stain, shatter separateness as divisive. Emphases realized as decisive, conceived borders we being inherits, everyone shares their respective merits. Douse not our embers, but keep strong our flame, warm the blaze to a glow from whence we came.

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Date: 12/3/2023 1:27:00 AM
This is an interesting sonnet.. Dont know why but immigration and closing borders came to mind...or maybe that was metaphorical... your sonnet flows and rhymes really well..
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Date: 12/3/2023 6:40:00 AM
On the nose, my friend, sadly. Just a peek at America's Statue of Captivity--hoping more soupers be aware, bit more sensitive as my lil guy I placed in the forefront, tho' unsaid, albeit, inferenced ..., oh well, thanks Silent One. P E A C E, and Aloha, William

Book: Shattered Sighs