Absent of pride, gave their lives, those they owed, bloodlines warrant one soul's intended quest persuades a past, that they constantly sowed pastoral guides sculptors essence is blessed Readiness spurs insights, smoothing passion unforeseen tests that fool-hearted, not them their unbidden stare on death's face, cash in pushed e'er determined, tensing a rose stem Unchecked horses, intrepid horsemen burst barrage relents as foe feared those affirmed lurked rears castle shadows most accursed chance lights and afront darken all confirmed won swords gained Heaven rewards fruition. Bold victor of few words, save salvation.
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