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Songs of Soul COS No 10: ABAB

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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Italian or Petrarchan
 
Inspired: 2023 November 30
 
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Absent of pride, gave their lives, those they owed,
bloodlines warrant one soul's intended quest
persuades a past, that they constantly sowed
pastoral guides sculptors essence is blessed
Readiness spurs insights, smoothing passion
unforeseen tests that fool-hearted, not them
their unbidden stare on death's face, cash in
pushed e'er determined, tensing a rose stem
Unchecked horses, intrepid horsemen burst
barrage relents as foe feared those affirmed
lurked rears castle shadows most accursed
chance lights and afront darken all confirmed
won swords gained Heaven rewards fruition.
Bold victor of few words, save salvation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/30/2023 8:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. Have a wonderful day.............
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Date: 11/30/2023 9:47:00 PM
A double thank you, Paula. Aloha, William

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