Songs of Power Wind of Change

Scorpion composed an epic song,
about the changes soon to be.
Thoughts and feelings that were once diverse,
Separations lasting years too long
caused global suffering to prolong.
Dividing friends and family;
Strained relationships were getting worse.
Voices joined together and grew strong.
Demanding an end to what was wrong.
At Gorky Park the world would see.
Differences would soon reverse.
A change of heart embraced the throng.
Would all these values remain lifelong?
Injustice ends jubilantly.
The seeds of tyranny will disperse.
The winds of change become the song.



I am not sure what to do about classifying my poem. This poem is called La'Tuin. It was created by Laura Lamarca. It consists of 4 stanzas with a ABCA rhyme pattern. The syllable is specific 9/8/9/8. If I am doing this wromg please advice me.

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Date: 11/21/2015 10:58:00 PM
This is a wonderful win Mary, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Mary Swingler
Date: 11/22/2015 2:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. You are a welcome mat of encouragement.
Date: 11/21/2015 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Mary
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Mary Swingler
Date: 11/21/2015 7:48:00 PM
Thank you sincerely for your encouragement.
Date: 11/21/2015 10:28:00 AM
wonderful take on the songs Mary :) congrats
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Mary Swingler
Date: 11/21/2015 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time encourage me.
Date: 11/21/2015 7:55:00 AM
great take on the song congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 8:15:00 AM
Lovely to hear from you Mary - the more you read and comment on the work of others the more you will gain from being a member of the soup community:-) hugs jan xx
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Mary Swingler
Date: 11/21/2015 8:13:00 AM
I hope it is alright to contact you. Your encouraging comments touch my heart. Thank you.
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