Songs of Power Contest-Let It Be

A poem written about "Let It Be" by the Beatles
Sponsor: Silent One

"Leave it as it is" said my affectionate mother,
She saves me from the shadows in the night,
There are lessons I need to discover,
May I be filled with wisdom as we unite.

So many questions left unanswerable,
May the sun radiate until tomorrow,
Broken hearted and vulnerable,
Full of emotional distress and sorrow.

"Leave it as it is" said my lovable mother,
She sails me away to a distant island,
In times of turmoil the darkness smothers,
She taught me to be subdued by silence.

May there be a solution for accusations,
Resolution and answers for all questions,
For her, my mother, gave me salvation,
A chance the wounded find complete redemption.

"Leave it as it is" said my warmhearted mother,
Expand and accumulate enlightenment,
All the times I was excluded and suffered,
Her wisdom freed me from imprisonment. 

Written: November 9, 2015

2nd Place Winner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 21, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Laura, Congratulations. **SKAT**
Scars Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Thank you very much SKAT :)
Negron Flores Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations Laura
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November 21, 2015 at 10:26 AM
congrats on your win Laura :)
Scars Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Thank you very much! :) -lu *smiles*
Lindley Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..A7
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November 21, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Thank you Robert :) -lu *smiles*
Dutta Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Wonderful Composition. Congrats Laura to win. Best Wishes. Anisha D
Scars Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Thank you Anisha very much :)
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Dropping back with my congrats LU:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Jan :)
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Beautiful interpretation of a lovely song - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7
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November 10, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Thank you Jan :) You are too sweet -LUxxx
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