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Songs of Power

Songs of power Dreaming of vivid colours yet painting in black, Singing vibrancy of life still living in dark, Cherishing freshness in air yet feeling suffocated, As if conscious veiled by fumes of depression ... No sunshine reaches as murky clouds blanket, All greens and oranges appear grey in Ishihara, When train of thoughts rams into the unkind, Just to leave collecting chips of memories ... The palette smears all its colours, Brushes the veins as red cries, and tears stain the cheeks black, soul engulfed into smoke of eternity ... Written Nov 20th, 2015 For contest "Songs of power" Inspired by song "Paint in black" by Rolling Sponsor- Silent one Awarded second place win Now entered for "100 in a row-9" contest by PD At

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Date: 8/6/2016 8:34:00 AM
So well expressed, congrats on your winning efforts.
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Date: 8/6/2016 2:12:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:59:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:00:00 PM
A 7 for sure, Upma. I'm moved by the way your winning poem describes the dark inner self striving to usher in the light! Congratulations Janice
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:30:00 AM
congrats on the win Dr. Upma :) God bless
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:07:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN MY FRIEND!A7
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:21:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome win Lovely poem i appreciate much Anisha D
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:57:00 AM
lovely take on the song congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:33:00 AM
Congs too upon this Poem Very well wrttien Sharma.. i love it my dear
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:21:00 AM
Great take on that Stones song Dr. Sharma! Great word usage as well!
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Date: 11/20/2015 5:49:00 AM
- A touching song from a great pen, Dr. Upma - I wish you good luck in the contest and a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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