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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Enclosed Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 25

Image: N/A

Songs of Nature COS No 4: ABBA

The garlands of Purple Heart's--lifespan 'twas
whilst mutuals courses' like facial scarves,
Earth, Moon, poise Theda, be all silent stars,
pray solemn moments like stealth jaguars.
Twilight unveils some gentler theme from me
postures a unified bestilled embrace.
'Neath a unique spotlight of afterglows grace,
thus thy footprints bare none e'er so gently.
Alight butterfly rest on a finger,
hushed spilled words persuades a whimsical breeze.
A star brightens midnight, airlocked deep freeze,
cradling Devil's Hour as demons linger.
Luna rights a bottled balm of leisure
surrounds cast fawning more pain and pleasure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 25, 2023 at 1:48 AM
wow love the opening verses and use of vocabulary.. this flows so well..
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November 27, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Oops, I thought--oh, well, Silent One. Thanks is the word I found, but not the word I needed. Aloha, William
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