Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Italian or Petrarchan

Inspired: 2023 November 24

Image: N/A

Songs of Nature COS No 1: ABAB

A sun encounters a probing of it,
course a bargain at a remote lea.
Jilt Thistles yields to breeze that never quit,
brush forces the stately Yellow Daisies
dressed, and clips wispy tall grass they'd cornered.
Giving Geraniums, lil' fuss yet mild,
errant gust o'er feral terrain, murmured
along roads of spooled vines, draped plain Pines filed.
Jumping Junipers Jurassic epoch,
weighs low Violets in check of their guides.
Mute untamed bouquet dells, wouldst edged dear Puck,
herald of joys, Baby Breaths, never chides.
Parts spring inseparable their lil' games,
divided droplets formed handheld mirth tames.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Such a well crafted sonnet dear William. So well written with great rhyming and flow. Love the style in which you’ve penned it. Also the vivid imagery with great lines. You’ve captured nature so beautifully which draws the reader in. So enjoyed reading it. Thank you my friend for sharing. Blessings to you for a lovely weekend. :):)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Your kind words, and they'd be some at that, Christina, all welcoming to our dawning Sun--I wonder where last night rain went, hmm? Mahalo much, my ffriend. Aloha, william
Hind Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 5:28 PM
Your style in these is old world. It's beautiful.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Alas, a penchant that reflects me, Paige. You have my thanks. Aloha, William
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Nature’s blooms Abundant Terrine and amidst a deer enjoy its feed. Enjoy reading, friend
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 1:40 PM
I'm glad you like the 1st one, Eve, since they're usually 15 in a Crown of Sonnets, doing the 10th now. Aloha, William
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