Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Couplet

Inspired: 2023 November 27

Image: N/A

Songs of Nature COS No 15: AABB

Goes a white doe, faint glimpse a wondering.
Rare diaphanous prismatic heartstring,
astir, the bestilled buds wake an ocean.
Nascent feels Aurora's palm in motion,
iridescence and redolence yon oaths,
divine dulcet elysian her outgrowths.
Moon/Star burrowing framing an archway,
You can kill fish, not stars, said Hemingway.
Golden sets of surfs delve a saffron sky,
amber rays herald as a beach comply.
Sands surrendered shoeless soles schlep trail
gild glitters flocked doves sprung free summer's veil.
A myriad of countenance submit
a sun encounters a probing of it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 27, 2023 at 10:17 AM
You have the most remarkable vocabulary.. this one has great word choices and as always flows and rhymes so well..
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November 27, 2023 at 3:41 PM
130p here, happy to have survived lunch w/friends, long enough to read your post, Silent One--with admiration. Aloha, William
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