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Songs of Nature COS No 15: AABB

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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Couplet

Inspired: 2023 November 27

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Goes a white doe, faint glimpse a wondering. Rare diaphanous prismatic heartstring, astir, the bestilled buds wake an ocean. Nascent feels Aurora's palm in motion, iridescence and redolence yon oaths, divine dulcet elysian her outgrowths. Moon/Star burrowing framing an archway, You can kill fish, not stars, said Hemingway. Golden sets of surfs delve a saffron sky, amber rays herald as a beach comply. Sands surrendered shoeless soles schlep trail gild glitters flocked doves sprung free summer's veil. A myriad of countenance submit a sun encounters a probing of it.

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Date: 11/27/2023 10:17:00 AM
You have the most remarkable vocabulary.. this one has great word choices and as always flows and rhymes so well..
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Date: 11/27/2023 3:41:00 PM
130p here, happy to have survived lunch w/friends, long enough to read your post, Silent One--with admiration. Aloha, William

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