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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Enclosed Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 27

Image: N/A

Songs of Nature COS No 14: ABBA

Sole say I, What wouldst be the reasoning?
Murmurs, her head swerves about, hesitates,
nibbles green herbs with care then elevates.
Cautious white doe, quaint sight a wandering.
Alert nose takes air, head bent back, above.
Hooves pave a path, being blue, surges clear.
Unaware, her head drops, tickles my sphere,
casts her spot of me, blanched soul feels her shove.
She lights her weight to level her being,
the full breadth of her trots to my chilled beat,
trots to shore, genteel flow, dares to repeat.
Tempted, being tide, yet pursuit was keen,
Perchance another day of challenging,
Goes a white doe, faint glimpse a wondering.
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November 27, 2023 at 2:23 AM
You rhyme so well always.. this one flows and the use of vocabulary helps that..I could feel your melodic nature in your words..
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November 27, 2023 at 10:00 AM
I welcome your noted insightful sharing, Silent One. Most appreciated, my friend. Aloha, William
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