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Songs of Nature COS No 12: AABB

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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Couplet

Inspired: 2023 November 26

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Occasions a sign as moonglade o'er lake. Hears lay the sleeper in brevities wake, retold roses red and violets blue, yet best in scarlet as would maroon too and lavender is said truer than blue ice hue bit tepid or too cool don't you. Adage, midst I, some pleasant sensation, that sharply parches vivid ribbons in from a morning mist, where I sail lightly, plucked anon afloat, raving aimlessly. Skims a peacock sky, fans its righteous hue, ducks stapled in a pond, quacks voices clue, A seized mind, I'll best keep a forward thought, I know last night's storm. What? Oh, I forgot.

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Date: 11/26/2023 5:22:00 PM
Very deep and beautiful....
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Hilo Poet
Date: 11/26/2023 5:31:00 PM
Thanks, Paige, for your shared visit. Aloha, William

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