Songless Bird

I perch on a rock by white teal-roofed bungalows, resting after my journey. Autumn's early bloom is a choir of falling leaves by a quiet rippling stream. The silence deafens as bright notes waft like snowflakes to earth in Fall's madrigal. I, a songless bird, rejoice in observation. The rippling stream chimes for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Very unique and lovely, Dale:)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 6:55 PM
'How beautiful, a songless bird that the river sings for. It's absolutely lovely. Good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:46 PM
A lovely Sedoka--so well written! Love the last line--good luck for the contest!
Smith Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Very beautiful Dale
Cozart Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, Tim.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Wow Dale, this is an excellent poem. I love it :)
Cozart Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
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