Songbird

      smoky-gray... frightened

   songbird... on my windowpane...

      overhead... bombs roar...

birdsongwarsenryu

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Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2024 at 9:13 AM

I can imagine that would be horrible for all of nature as well as for all of mankind to be in a war zone. Thanks for sharing your thought with us and I hope you are not in the war zone. Sara K

Karen Jones

February 13, 2024 at 6:33 PM

Very vivid picture and sad. Great job!

Bill Baker

February 13, 2024 at 5:51 PM

Excellent Senryu for everyone except that smoky-gray bird. I'll added it Sara's comment below, "yet". BB

Heidi Sands

February 13, 2024 at 5:31 AM

Wow . Very powerful . Well done Gershon ! Take care my friend :)

Mike Gentile

February 13, 2024 at 4:37 AM

Wow, GW, so much power in so few words, you've conveyed so much here as I sit having coffee amid what's going on in the rest of the world! Such a poetically intense poem you have crafted, excellent!