Song To a Teaset

I love each little plate of blue,
and every cup and saucer, too;
you have been mine for many years.
I treasure you. I wept hot tears
when once a child in careless play,
who knew he should not come your way,
knocked you across the table top.
I held my breath but could not stop
the clatter, shatter: it is true
my heart has been broken same as you.
But just because a plate is glued,
the handle of a cup is, too,
I do not love you less today:
I love you more I would say.
I value you more your fragile art:
you are so like a broken heart.

Copyright, 1987, Faye Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/18/2014 10:37:00 AM
Hi, Congrats. Sentimental value always a constant reminder of days gone by. It is comforting to have these things in our possession. Well done for the fine flow throughout. Regards, Theresa xx
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:37:00 PM
Beautifully done my friend...'So like a broken heart' indeed. This really hits home to me and you are on a roll!!...Keep entering and keep winning! - Tim
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Date: 5/17/2014 11:22:00 AM
Amazing write Faye ! Tender emotions for antiques ,, valuable pieces priceless ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/17/2014 9:36:00 AM
Oh, how sweet is this? I love that there was a story that did not diminish the love of a precious antique. I would have placed this higher! :)
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:50:00 AM
like the beat and rhyme in this write.. :) CONGRATULATIONS>> :), from olive
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:46:00 AM
wow! love the beat and rhyme accompanied in thi write.. :) and the sentiments written in it.. :)
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:44:00 PM
this is a wonderful little gem. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:09:00 PM
Wonderful sentiments...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/16/2014 9:44:00 PM
Lovely Faye. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2014 6:41:00 PM
Very nice. There is a Japanese word, Kintsukuroi, which is the art of repairing pottery and understanding that the piece is more beautiful for having been broken. I think it applies wonderfully here. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:14:00 PM
nice win Faye......SKAT
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