Song of The Jaguar No 2: ABBA

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Enclosed Rhyme
Inspired: 2023 December 12
Image: Rare Black Jaguar Cub by UK Animal Sanctuary

Adorable Rare Black Jaguar Cub Born at English Animal Sanctuary

Inspiring, crescendo ... the ascension, of myth and legend as Yaguara, or "Death in one leap" the sleek frame, Jaguar as if it's from another dimension. Leopards bit spotty, but Jaguars take a rosette form, tell-tale signs like water that natures them. As a jungle squatter, prey, and time of hunt, don't discriminate their mettle. Domains--mine alone; moms play dads too, tongues play teeth too, cubs play adult as hunt molds age. Overcast shades result in a Black Panther coexist display. Imperil: human expansion collide, ... imagine our continental divide.

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Valsa George

Date: 12/18/2023 12:46:00 AM

Your picturesque take on wild life is deep and fascinating! Jaguars are streamlined in such a way that they can leap and run like arrows and they are the beauty and terror of the forest. Their mettle cannot be underrated. Brilliant rhyming and versification, dear poet friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/18/2023 12:59:00 AM

Hi, Valsa. I leave the image out from the Song series, though pictures are an easier telltale bit of info. Thank you again for your explicit review and sweet adulations, my friend. Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 2:15:00 PM

Now these are brilliant rhymes...your sinned flows really well Hilo..

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/18/2023 12:54:00 AM

I'm sorta writing overtime, I have been reading your Anec... form/couplet and tend to give it a whirl, when my quill rests a bit...but I'm finding like yours here if it wasn't for Valsa--yikes. I like it when you write your reviews, even like this one, Silent One. Thank you, my friend. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/13/2023 6:56:00 AM

Your song of fauna resonates throughout your poem my friend. Death in one leap--moms play dads too, tongues play teeth too, cubs play adult as hunt molds age---your descriptions bring forth the lively scenes of life in the wild. A FAVE for the reality and depth of your ending lines, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/13/2023 7:09:00 AM

Aloha, Vijay. Your visit and shared highlights pleases me and your fave, honors me, my friend. Blessings and Mahalo, William

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 7:30:00 PM

Wow, this is such a fascinating song of fauna, huef with vivid imageries and covering the instances of life in the forest in such an intriguing way. You truly come up with creative concepts to write on, which makes it a very interesting read.. Those ending two lines are quite deep..wonderfully crafted piece!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/12/2023 9:52:00 PM

Most grateful, Hiya, for your thought-filled expressions. I'll remember them always, or revisit my poems, and wipe off dust, my friend. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/12/2023 4:00:00 PM

an intriguing creation, William. I'm tired and am having trouble getting the jest of your words...but will try again tomorrow after a good night's rest. Was up at 4 a.m. GEEZ! Hope you are well, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/12/2023 4:35:00 PM

OMGeez, indeed, Sara. Either invest in a new clock or better yet, move to an accommodating time zone State. Well, I am, my friend. Aloha, William