Song of The Geckos No 2: ABBA

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Enclosed Rhyme
Inspired: 2023 December 28
Image: My Leopard Gecko’s Throat Moving Fast? by Vet Tech

Why Is My Leopard Gecko's Throat Moving Fast

Rainbow suave sky soars the aliferous, swarms as life bores a chance of existence, so the geckos take without resistance, for there are those who find them delicious. They're unorganized, but there are plenty, great variety hails many choices, of shades, tints, hues, much to share, tiny moists' plus small, big, quick, stealth, and there's shadowy. Intriguingly, there are guides for caring, them itsy, creeps, bitsy, crawling critters! Confidence too close for comfort, --jitters! Neighbors donned smiles, objectively sharing. Save for a few pets, that's very lucky, most times people just see them as yucky.

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/29/2023 4:04:00 AM

Yea very true, about your last line , how most perceive them, its nice to see you appreciate them though. You’ve described in a way that they sound beautiful and the picture you’ve used too is brilliant. I love especially the opening lines. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/29/2023 6:30:00 AM

Ah, they are part of the minor leagues, a conclusion drawn on the fact that there was so little info about a particular species available online, seemingly, satisfied reduction clomped into one. I will strive to research further sparing a trip to the local library to access their basement of dusty bookshelves.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/29/2023 6:29:00 AM

Albeit, many have seen my way into the dramatics and mayhaps add a bit of a panache to the humdrum. Thanks for dropping by your note noted, my friend. Aloha, William